Friday, April 15, 2011

Pow Wow

          March 12th, some people went to PowWow that is traditional Native American ceremony. At the first, they danced with big sound.
          First, they made people feel excited  about their cloth. First they told about their clothes. That cloths made by their wife. That cloths is very traditional, and a lot of style. That cloths has big decoration, and very showy.
          Second, they mede people surprised their Dance is very traditional and everyone can dance that dancing. The dance was very easy. So they can dance it very easily.
          Third, there are traditional jewelry. That is made of stone. String is made of fishing line. That is very cute. There were so cheap!!

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  2. some people went to the PowWow which is a traditional
    First, they made people feel excited
    First they told about their clothes
    clothes
    clothes
    they made people surprised
    the dance was very easy

    use past tense verbs

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